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 her age at precisely 15ish.  This makes her young enough that she fits my image, her age at precisely 15ish.  This makes her young enough that she fits my image,
 but still old enough to be considered a "woman" by a lecherous old man such as but still old enough to be considered a "woman" by a lecherous old man such as
-Roderick. In fact, there is a certain duality in her that confuses Roderick.+Roderick. In fact, there is a certain duality in her that confuses [[Roderick]].
 She really does seem to be BOTH a young girl and a (very alluring) woman. She really does seem to be BOTH a young girl and a (very alluring) woman.
  
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 your peripheral vision.  You turn to see the young girl you originally met in your peripheral vision.  You turn to see the young girl you originally met in
 the dead village of Gressa.  She looks up at you with a serious expression on the dead village of Gressa.  She looks up at you with a serious expression on
-her face and says, "If Roget needs help, you may give it.  But only if he asks!"+her face and says, "If [[Roget]] needs help, you may give it.  But only if he asks!"
 There is something terribly ominous about her voice.  You feel frightened and a There is something terribly ominous about her voice.  You feel frightened and a
 little embarrassed, as though you were being lectured by an elder. little embarrassed, as though you were being lectured by an elder.
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